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家教机构“Explore learning”举办作文竞赛“young writers competition”,面向14岁以下的小孩。获胜者可以带全家去巴黎的迪斯尼乐园度假(4天)。据说每年有一万多小孩参赛。今年作文主题是“奇怪的事”(受你的梦或新闻启发)。田田星期五(截止日期)早上赶写了一篇会说话的狗跟她一起时间旅行的故事。我觉得她的想象力不错,建议她可以再润色一下。于是下午放学后游泳与女童军活动之间她又改了一下,加了一些文学手法。下面是她写的故事,她自己还配了一幅图,希望你会喜欢。

My Very Own Dog

I’ve always wanted my own dog. My own loyal greyhound or a sun-gold labrador. I was watching another episode of ‘Blow your mind’. There was a magnificent Scottish terrier that could read the time. How I wish I could’ve had him. Then he leaped out of the TV screen and barked:
‘Hello! I’m Timmy.’
I was bewildered. A talking, time-telling dog of my own. A wonderful gift from heaven, Timmy was. My very own dog…

I dumped my tattered school bag on my azure, soft, star-sprinkled bed. (more…)

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田田写起作文来经常是洋洋洒洒,要么主题不明确,要么写了两页A4纸故事还刚开始。可是考试的时候是要在很短的时间内写一个故事,你的描写再好,如果故事没写完,那肯定是“完蛋”了。象DAO入学考试是阅读理解和写作总共加起来一个小时,包括读短文,回答题目和写作文(续写故事)。作文时间最多也就25-30分钟。

我准备给田田训练30分钟作文。正好她想参加“五百字作文比赛”,可以写一篇。 (more…)

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